Comments on: The orange grasshopper dreams of a life by the sea

By: sunshine

sunshine — Sat, 05 Mar 2005 01:03:29 +0000

awh… thanks guys.

By: erin

erin — Fri, 04 Mar 2005 14:38:01 +0000

have i mentioned that i think it’s really brave of you to post something so dear to your heart and welcome feedback?

erin

By: jack

jack — Fri, 04 Mar 2005 03:36:21 +0000

Really nice story. I am glad that you are writing. I recall an ancient girlfriend and you started to write a novel one time. Now you are finishng the stories. Bravo!

By: erin

erin — Thu, 03 Mar 2005 20:05:35 +0000

i like that the ending is implied, but open to intepretation (for us optomists everywhere!)

By: sunshine

sunshine — Thu, 03 Mar 2005 04:40:56 +0000

I’d really like to take my writing further…

And i tell you, the encouragement i get here is deeply appreciated. thank you.

: )

By: gino

gino — Wed, 02 Mar 2005 23:41:00 +0000

sunshine,

you did it again, another great story.

you should write a book, i’ll draw the
characters and then we could create a
music cd to go with it !

i love your stories.

By: moonbeam

moonbeam — Sat, 26 Feb 2005 18:29:35 +0000

oh, honey….a beautifully written story….very sad…..

By: fritz

fritz — Wed, 23 Feb 2005 13:16:57 +0000

Glad orange grasshopper finally had the balls to explore the fields, and dream a little higher than just sitting around…. I was getting claustrophobic just sittin’ there with blue and green…
then it got quite exciting. all those wildflowers and shrubs, and the sun sparkling on the sand…. and that scary shadow ( its scary cos its true )…
I totally got SHIVERY GOOSEBUMPS as orange “watched the tops of the trees as he softly closed his eyes, and gave in to the pressure surrounding his delicate body”.

Oh Orange… I’ve seen the tops of those trees as well, felt the wind rush thru my antennae…bittersweet.