well, the spelling errors not withstanding, the text of Punk is intentional. The lack of clarity, the confusion of the time line, the stories spinning out of control, the narration abandoning you quickly, leaving you on your own with the mind and actions of the voice telling the story.

Mod is a different voice. Same person, still no name, very different story.

I can’t wait to see what happens!

Love it. Loved Punk. Can’t wait for this one. I have to be careful though. Punk kept me up for a few nights. Couldn’t put it down. Your writing has got better by the way.

I’m just getting it together now…

take it easy on me. More to come. More to come.

Nicely crafted overview. I like how you switched up talking about the early mods with the context of your own stories. But darlin’ –where’s our music? I was hoping there’d be some sound at the end of the chapter….Although I’ve got ‘Love Reign O’er Me’ in my head now anyways. : )

So great - more please!

can we have more please ?

i’ve been waiting for this,
thank you sunshine.

i love your writeing.

looking forward to more.

g.

I’m going to be picky here and hope you can take it : ). There actually were parka wearing, chanting mods in the 1960s in Brighton. There are photos in the Brighton Museum. And you were born when My Generation was released in 1965 so don’t you try to pretend!

a.) It’s true, but it wasn’t the same thing as the modern clich?©
b.) i was certainly born 1965 it’s true, but when the single of ‘My Generation’ came out, I had not yet been birthed into the world.

I can take it, is that all you got? bring it!

I’m going to be picky here and hope you can take it : ). There actually were parka wearing, chanting mods in the 1960s in Brighton. There are photos in the Brighton Museum. And you were born when My Generation was released in 1965 so don’t you try to pretend!

The water is dripping off my hair and mud is splashed across my face. How did I end up standing on the field with you and Mike? It’s not cold enough to see your breath but your noses are red and running.