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	<title>Comments on: Dear Mr. Salinger</title>
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		<title>By: *allison</title>
		<link>http://sunshine-jones.com/dear-mr-salinger/comment-page-1/#comment-447</link>
		<dc:creator>*allison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2005 02:16:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I thank goodness that you gave me 'Franny &#038; Zooey' so many years ago for Christmas. It is the single most important gift that I have ever received...

I've always dreamed that I &lt;i&gt;&lt;b&gt;am&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/i&gt; Franny (or that I could play her in a stage version). Never has their been a character in a book with whom I indentify so closely. 

The lengthy conversation she and Zooey have reminds me of you and me. Though we never quite get into it like that, I like to think that our connection is as deep and thoughtful.

I too re-read F&#038;Z, but maybe about every 2 years. I think it's time again. Thank you for reminding me of it...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I thank goodness that you gave me &#8216;Franny &#038; Zooey&#8217; so many years ago for Christmas. It is the single most important gift that I have ever received&#8230;</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve always dreamed that I <i><b>am</b></i> Franny (or that I could play her in a stage version). Never has their been a character in a book with whom I indentify so closely. </p>
<p>The lengthy conversation she and Zooey have reminds me of you and me. Though we never quite get into it like that, I like to think that our connection is as deep and thoughtful.</p>
<p>I too re-read F&#038;Z, but maybe about every 2 years. I think it&#8217;s time again. Thank you for reminding me of it&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: sunshine</title>
		<link>http://sunshine-jones.com/dear-mr-salinger/comment-page-1/#comment-444</link>
		<dc:creator>sunshine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Jan 2005 11:29:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>yes, i am.

I haven't published much of anything here from the book. there is a post called "a crumpled up dollar off cupon" which is an excerpt from a more developed piece now.

essentially i framed the book into a long list of essays and stories i wanted to fold together into the book.

I realized quickly that i was writing a deeply trivial, personal edition of war and peace.

Knowing that i am flowery, as well as quite blunt, i see that the novelty of my writing is quickly threadbare unless i am making a point.

So i resized my book and am now reworking the essays to happen in 2-4 days rather than 2-3 years. Also, as the stories are interesting i tend to go on and on...

So i am also pruning, and interjecting side stories to enrich the experience with personality and experiences beyond that of the protagonist/ narrator.

i'm hoping this embellished fram will result in a faster read which the reader will care a lot more about, and find more interesting.

the single greatest pitfall i find to writing is that no one knows when i am joking or being serious.

i'll take all the dumbfounded, awe, and laughter i can get, but when it's just blank. ooooh, that's death.

so i'll keep it up.

book one of three (planned for now)

s.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>yes, i am.</p>
<p>I haven&#8217;t published much of anything here from the book. there is a post called &#8220;a crumpled up dollar off cupon&#8221; which is an excerpt from a more developed piece now.</p>
<p>essentially i framed the book into a long list of essays and stories i wanted to fold together into the book.</p>
<p>I realized quickly that i was writing a deeply trivial, personal edition of war and peace.</p>
<p>Knowing that i am flowery, as well as quite blunt, i see that the novelty of my writing is quickly threadbare unless i am making a point.</p>
<p>So i resized my book and am now reworking the essays to happen in 2-4 days rather than 2-3 years. Also, as the stories are interesting i tend to go on and on&#8230;</p>
<p>So i am also pruning, and interjecting side stories to enrich the experience with personality and experiences beyond that of the protagonist/ narrator.</p>
<p>i&#8217;m hoping this embellished fram will result in a faster read which the reader will care a lot more about, and find more interesting.</p>
<p>the single greatest pitfall i find to writing is that no one knows when i am joking or being serious.</p>
<p>i&#8217;ll take all the dumbfounded, awe, and laughter i can get, but when it&#8217;s just blank. ooooh, that&#8217;s death.</p>
<p>so i&#8217;ll keep it up.</p>
<p>book one of three (planned for now)</p>
<p>s.</p>
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		<title>By: Don</title>
		<link>http://sunshine-jones.com/dear-mr-salinger/comment-page-1/#comment-443</link>
		<dc:creator>Don</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Jan 2005 01:59:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>of course, you are right, but I just love the way that the best authors make you think that you have a personal relationship with their characters.  I think that is why reading is such a creative and stimulating activity! And speaking of which... I was going to tell you this in person, but you are such a great writer.  I've always enjoyed reading your posts on the message board, but imagine my joy upon finding out that you had an entire website of just your writings.  yay! I can't wait to read through everything.  Did I read somewhere that you are working on a novel? sweet.  and motivational.  nice work.
da</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>of course, you are right, but I just love the way that the best authors make you think that you have a personal relationship with their characters.  I think that is why reading is such a creative and stimulating activity! And speaking of which&#8230; I was going to tell you this in person, but you are such a great writer.  I&#8217;ve always enjoyed reading your posts on the message board, but imagine my joy upon finding out that you had an entire website of just your writings.  yay! I can&#8217;t wait to read through everything.  Did I read somewhere that you are working on a novel? sweet.  and motivational.  nice work.<br />
da</p>
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		<title>By: sunshine</title>
		<link>http://sunshine-jones.com/dear-mr-salinger/comment-page-1/#comment-442</link>
		<dc:creator>sunshine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Jan 2005 00:26:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>We'll just have to share her.

I'll have my Franny Glass, and you can have your own.

love,
s.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>We&#8217;ll just have to share her.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll have my Franny Glass, and you can have your own.</p>
<p>love,<br />
s.</p>
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		<title>By: Don</title>
		<link>http://sunshine-jones.com/dear-mr-salinger/comment-page-1/#comment-440</link>
		<dc:creator>Don</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 Jan 2005 23:05:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>While I've never fought anyone over a girl before (or over anything, really), I'm afraid that you and I may need to exchange blows over Franny.  Fistacuffs, if you will.  Sorry, friend, she's mine.  (Of course, she would be couch-bound for a week after a date with me - How could I compare to the Glass family?) - da</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>While I&#8217;ve never fought anyone over a girl before (or over anything, really), I&#8217;m afraid that you and I may need to exchange blows over Franny.  Fistacuffs, if you will.  Sorry, friend, she&#8217;s mine.  (Of course, she would be couch-bound for a week after a date with me - How could I compare to the Glass family?) - da</p>
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